Detailed synopsis – perhaps some inter-textual reference where applicable (i.e. influences).
Costume – good in terms of semiotics – pictures of suggested items would help improve
Location – needs a series of annotated pictures
Characters – more depth to the back story required, plus some images – casting info??
Storyboard – good detail on camera angles and good use of technology. It would benefit from colour, duration of shots (estimated) and detail of when diegetic sound is intended to be used. Also, in terms of credits – do you intend to show them over a blank screen, or during the opening sequence itself?
Detailed synopsis – perhaps some inter-textual reference where applicable (i.e. influences).
ReplyDeleteCostume – good in terms of semiotics – pictures of suggested items would help improve
Location – needs a series of annotated pictures
Characters – more depth to the back story required, plus some images – casting info??
Storyboard – good detail on camera angles and good use of technology. It would benefit from colour, duration of shots (estimated) and detail of when diegetic sound is intended to be used. Also, in terms of credits – do you intend to show them over a blank screen, or during the opening sequence itself?